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Breathe, Sleep, Love by ~faerygirl24:iconfaerygirl24:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Breathe.
Just take a deep breath.
Breathing is the fundamental mediator of our state of health.
It can draw out poison,
Release sorrows,
Quench anger,
Gives us life.

Sleep.
Just close your eyes and sleep.
Sleeping is the ultimate healer of all wounds.
It give us rebirth,
Helps us grow,
Restores our energy,
Allows us to live.

Love.
Just let down your guard.
Love is what helps us understand what it means to be human.
It can give us pure joy,
Make us compassionate and merciful,
Open our eyes to the world,
Make us whole.

Breathe to live,
Sleep to grow,
Love to understand
©2007-2010 ~faerygirl24
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Author's Comments

Another poem. I started this one with the intention of it being automatism, but I revised it too much for it to be that...

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~JL1 Dec 29, 2007, 8:09:19 AM
i like i, especially how you draw it all togather at the end with

"Breathe to live,
Sleep to grow,
Love to understand"

Awesome
fav!

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why do i talk out loud

bullets can't silence an idea!

niether war nor peace has solved the worlds problems
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~faerygirl24 Dec 29, 2007, 10:59:15 AM
thank you. :) yeah, so do i. i actually submitted it without that and then added it a couple seconds later...lol!

:hug:

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The Will of God never takes you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Without music, life would B^b.
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~Scurvy-Chopsticks Dec 29, 2007, 9:56:03 PM
o i love this, its very wise, very well done!

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No matter how bad things get, you got to go on living, even if it kills you
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~faerygirl24 Dec 30, 2007, 10:10:54 AM
lol, thankees! idk why, but i always resort to breathing when emotions are high...

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The Will of God never takes you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Without music, life would B^b.
:iconjl1:
~JL1 Dec 30, 2007, 10:16:00 AM
i think it helps to sum it all up.
:hug:

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why do i talk out loud

bullets can't silence an idea!

niether war nor peace has solved the worlds problems
:iconfaerygirl24:
~faerygirl24 Dec 30, 2007, 10:48:01 AM
me too.

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The Will of God never takes you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Without music, life would B^b.
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~ShadowWolf3117 Dec 30, 2007, 8:04:49 PM
Breathing is integral, definitely... But sleep? Bah! ;P

Well done! I have a few poems like this one, starting automatistic, and getting distracted. ^^;

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I rolled a natural 1 on my reality check.

Please take [link] for me and my class! Thank you in advance!
:iconfaerygirl24:
~faerygirl24 Dec 30, 2007, 8:18:32 PM
yes!!! sleep is really sooo important! the problem is, our society completetly dismisses it... -.-

hehe.

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The Will of God never takes you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Without music, life would B^b.
:iconshadowwolf3117:
~ShadowWolf3117 Dec 30, 2007, 9:06:37 PM
Isn't! *is in denial. Currently operating on 3 hours of sleep. Passes out on keyboard*

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I rolled a natural 1 on my reality check.

Please take [link] for me and my class! Thank you in advance!
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